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Book Review | Everything is Just Beginning by Erin Bartels

I almost didn’t request a review copy of Everything is Just Beginning because I wasn’t sure I wanted to go back to 1989, and because I wasn’t sure I wanted to read a novel about a wannabe musician.

But I changed my mind, requested it, and I’m glad I did.

Michael Sullivan has been kicked out of his band and apartment, so has moved in with his uncle. He’s not an immediately likeable character: it’s not immediately clear why he was kicked out of his apartment, but it’s obviously not the first time.

He’s working a basic retail job and grumbling about life, then decides to gatecrash a party in the hope of meeting Dusty Wheeler, a big name in the music business. If Mike can get Dusty to listen to a demo tape, maybe the guys will let him back in the band.

The story is written in first person point of view, which will bug some people.

I like first person, but I do prefer to be in the head of a likeable female character, not a male with a woe-is-me attitude. Yes, the whole story is from Michael’s point of view.

He meets Dusty and Deb Wheeler at the party, although he doesn’t realise it at the time. He also meets their daughter, Natalie, who is blind.

Once Michael gets over himself, he turns into a readable and relatable character. his bravado is hiding a difficult childhood and a desperate desire to be a musician – a proper musician. As he spends time with the Wheeler family, he falls for Natalie (who does not appear to return his feelings), they decide to write music together, and Michael gradually loses what Natalie describes as his morose vibe.

Natalie is also a great character.

She’s had a privileged upbringing, and it’s easy to forget she’s blind. It’s actually been along time since I’ve read a novel with a blind main character. She was musical and clever, with an amazing memory, and it was great to read such an individual and competent character.

As it turned out, the fact the novel was set in 1989 was less about the historic events of 1989 and more about the music … which happens to be the music I grew up with and still prefer listening to, so that was great.

Everything is Just Beginning doesn’t easily fit into a genre.

It’s not explicitly Christian, although it’s fairly obvious the Wheeler family are Christians.

It’s not technically contemporary, but isn’t historical enough to be truly considerd a historical.

It’s not Young Adult fiction, although it does have elements of a coming of age story.

It’s not a romance, in that the core story is Michael’s relationship with music through Natalie, rather than Michaels’ relationship with Natalie.

It’s also not literary fiction, despite the great writing, because there is a definite plot with strong character arcs.

If you like great writing, compelling characters, and a bunch of 1980s music reference, you’ll enjoy Everything is Just Beginning.

Thanks to Revell and NetGalley for providing a free ebook for review.

About Erin Bartels

Erin BartelsErin Bartels is the award-winning author of We Hope for Better ThingsThe Words between UsAll That We Carried, and The Girl Who Could Breathe Under Water (coming January 2022). Her short story “This Elegant Ruin” was a finalist in The Saturday Evening Post 2014 Great American Fiction Contest and her poetry has been published by The Lyric. She lives in the capital city of a state that is 40% water, nestled somewhere between angry protesters on the Capitol lawn and couch-burning frat boys at Michigan State University. And yet, she claims it is really quite peaceful.

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About Everything is Just Beginning

An Immersive Story of Music, Struggle, and Starting Over from an Award-Winning Author

Michael Sullivan is a talented lyricist and a decent guitarist, but since he was kicked out of his band (and his apartment), he’s not sure he’ll ever get a record deal. Living with his loser uncle in a beat-up trailer and working a dead-end job, Michael has little reason to hope for a better future. Until the invitation for a swanky New Year’s Eve party shows up in the mailbox. It’s for his uncle, with whom he shares his name, but his uncle is going out of town . . .

On the effervescent night of December 31, 1989–as the Berlin Wall is coming down, the Soviet Union is inching toward democracy, and anything seems possible–Michael will cross paths with the accomplished and enigmatic young heir to a fading musical dynasty, forever altering both of their futures.

Award-winning novelist Erin Bartels enchants with this story of two lonely souls who have exactly what the other one needs–if they could simply turn their focus from what is ending to what is just beginning.

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First Line Friday

First Line Friday | Week 99 | The Secret to Hummingbird Cake

It’s First Line Friday! That means it’s time to pick up the nearest book and quote the first line. Today I’m sharing from The Secret to Hummingbird Cake by Celeste Fletcher McHale. It got a few critical reviews for not being “Christian” enough … which got me wondering why! Here’s the first line:

I glanced at the grandfather clock. Almost midnight.

What’s the book nearest you, and what’s the first line?

About The Secret to Hummingbird Cake

“Why won’t you just tell me what’s in that cake?” I’d been trying to get Laine’s recipe for years. We all had.

When all else fails, turn to the divine taste of hummingbird cake.

In the South you always say “yes, ma’am” and “no, ma’am.” You know everybody’s business. Football is a lifestyle not a pastime. Food—especially dessert— is almost a religious experience. And you protect your friends as fiercely as you protect your family— even if the threat is something you cannot see.

In this spot-on Southern novel brimming with wit and authenticity, you’ll laugh alongside lifelong friends, navigate the sometimes rocky path of marriage, and roll through the outrageous curveballs that life sometimes throws . . . from devastating pain to absolute joy. And if you’re lucky, you just may discover the secret to hummingbird cake along the way.

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