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Do you like Christian fiction with a strong Christian message?

Bookish Question #230 | Do you like Christian fiction with a strong Christian message?

Do you like Christian fiction with a strong Christian message?

Yes 🙂

And no.

Some novels marketed as Christian fiction have little or no faith content, but are still clearly Christian fiction because of their themes. An example is The Baggage Handler by David Rawlings. Anyone who reads the story will see it’s an allegory about how we need to let go of the unnecessary emotional baggage we carry through life. A Christian reader will understand we let go of that baggage by releasing it to God.

The story doesn’t mention God or Jesus.

That doesn’t make it any less Christian fiction.

Other Christian fiction doesn’t have clear faith themes, but the characters are Christian and their decisions and actions reflect their beliefs.

I enjoy reading these stories.

(In contrast, I loathe reading stories—general market or Christian—where the character’s problems could be solved by them getting right with God.)

I’m also not a fan of overtly Christian stories where the faith element seems forced or where the characters speak in Scripture all the time.

These stories often feel preachy, because the dialogue and actions don’t feel real.

That comes down to how well the author has created the characters. I know people in real life who do speak in Scripture and who punctuate every other sentence with “praise the Lord!” or something similar, and it sounds perfectly natural.

I’ve also met people who speak like this and it sounds forced, as though they’re speaking like that because they think that’s how a good Christian speaks … not because that’s how they speak. I can tell the difference in real life, and I can tell the difference in fiction.

So while I do enjoy fiction with a strong Christian message, I don’t want Christian fiction that crosses the line into preachy.

I want to see characters who live their faith throughout the novel, not just on Sunday.

What about you? Do you like Christian fiction with a strong Christian message?

The most important thing Dawn expected from her ice cream was consistency—because she couldn't expect it from the rest of her life.

Book Review | The Sweet Life by Suzanne Woods Fisher

I downloaded this book for review based solely on the cover and the title. My mistake. I must have read the description—I always do—but I can tell in hindsight that I didn’t read it properly.

The title and cover gave me the impression The Sweet Life was a romance.

The last line of the book description would have confirmed that. As such, I was expecting this to be Dawn’s story of recovery from her broken engagement, then reconnecting with her ex through her mother’s impulse buy—a dilapidated ice cream store.

It started with a cast of characters … not a great sign in a contemporary novel. I can deal with the cast of characters in historical fiction, where it can be important for the reader to know which characters are real historical figures and which are imaginary. But in contemporary fiction? A good writer should be able to introduce the characters in such a way that the reader knows them all and never gets confused (which, to her credit, Suzanne Woods Fisher achieved). But starting with the cast of characters feels like a weakness, as though readers aren’t going to be able to work out these vital details.

Anyway, onto the story.

I was expecting this to be mostly Dawn’s story. It wasn’t.

It was probably an equal split between Marnie (the mother) and Dawn (the daughter). They are complete opposites, which was interesting but did occasionally veer into caricature. Both were obsessive to the point of ridiculous at times and felt like the author was trying to make a point rather than being true to the characters.

My favourite characters were Lincoln, a sixty-something ex-pastor who volunteers a lot of helping the ice cream parlour, and five-year-old Leo the Cowboy, who loves ice cream (although I did wonder where his parents were, and why he seemed to have the run of the town all day, every day).

My least favourite characters, unfortunately, were Marnie and Dawn.

I lost all respect for Dawn —the accountant who is trying to make partner in her firm—when she suggested paying Lincoln under the table. Maybe the author or publisher doesn’t know that that term means. If so, can I recommend asking Aunty Google? The internet says Dawn could face 57 years in prison if she’s caught … surely that’s a career-limiting move for an accountant who wants to make partner.

(Here’s a tip for employees: it’s illegal for your employer to pay you under the table and can result in severe penalties for your employer and for you).

The other thing that bugged me was the lack of communication between mother and daughter.

Dawn gets testy when she discovers her mother has spent money that’s not in Dawn’s detailed budget, but Dawn also doesn’t ask the obvious questions (like where the money is coming from). Yes, there were a couple of duh! moments when Dawn finally worked out the obvious.

In Marnie’s defence, she’s recently lost her husband and gone through breast cancer treatment. Now she wants to rebuild her life, and her relationship with her daughter. So she buys an ice cream shop, because her husband and daughter used to make ice cream together.

If you’re looking for a fun rom-com (as suggested by the cover), The Sweet Life is not the book for you.

But if you’re looking for women’s fiction that explores some deeper mother-daughter issues, it could be.

The Sweet Life appears to be the first book in the Cape Cod Creamery series. Even knowing it’s more women’s fiction than rom-com, I don’t know if I’m invested enough to want to read future books in the series.

The location had potential, but the characterisation writing just weren’t strong enough to grab me.

I had a similar issue with the last Suzanne Woods Fisher title I reviewed, The Moonlight School. I wrote:

My reactions to this book show the importance of setting expectations as an author, then delivering on them. The book was excellent. But it wasn’t the book the title or book description promised.

The Moonlight School and The Sweet Life are both from mainstream publishers. They are not self-published. As such, the issues with the book title, cover, and book description are the responsibility of the publisher, not the author.  I hope they do better for the author next time.

Thanks to Revell Books and NetGalley for providing a free ebook for review.

About Suzanne Woods Fisher

Suzanne Woods FIsherSuzanne Woods Fisher is an award-winning, bestselling author of more than 30 books, including On a Summer Tide and On a Coastal Breeze, as well as the Nantucket Legacy, Amish Beginnings, The Bishop’s Family, The Deacon’s Family, and The Inn at Eagle Hill series, among other novels. She is also the author of several nonfiction books about the Amish, including Amish Peace and Amish Proverbs.

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About The Sweet Life

Dawn Dixon can hardly believe she’s on a groomless honeymoon on beautiful Cape Cod . . . with her mother. Sure, Marnie Dixon is good company, but Dawn was supposed to be here with Kevin, the love of her life (or so she thought).

Marnie Dixon needs some time away from the absolute realness of life as much as her jilted daughter does, and she’s not about to let her only child suffer alone–even if Marnie herself had been doing precisely that for the past month.

Given the circumstances, maybe it was inevitable that Marnie would do something as rash as buy a run-down ice-cream shop in the town’s tightly regulated historic district. After all, everything’s better with ice cream.

Her exasperated daughter knows that she’s the one who will have to clean up this mess. Even when her mother’s impulsive real estate purchase brings Kevin back into her life, Dawn doesn’t get her hopes up. Everyone knows that broken romances stay broken . . . don’t they?

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First Line Friday

First Line Friday | Week #237 | Cake That! by Heather Greer

It’s First Line Friday! That means it’s time to pick up the nearest book and quote the first line. Today I’m sharing from Cake That! by Heather Greer, a Christian rom-com from a new-to-author. Here’s the first line from the Chapter One:

The stainless-steel mixing bowls crashed together like gongs hammered by rhythm-challenged children as Livvy shoved them into the lower cabinet and forced the door shut.

What’s the book nearest you, and what’s the first line?

About Cake That!

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Do the hero and heroine in a Christian romance both have to be Christians?

Bookish Question #229 | Do the hero and heroine in a Christian romance novel have to be Christians?

Do the hero and heroine in a Christian romance both have to be Christians?

At the beginning of the novel? No.

By the end of the novel? Yes.

The Bible warns us against being equally yoked, and advises us that a threefold cord (man, woman, and God) is not easily broken. I take that advice to heart in life and in fiction. Just as I would counsel a friend against marrying an unbeliever, I wouldn’t like to see a fictional character make that mistake… unless it’s women’s fiction and the whole point of the book is to show the problems that come with marrying an unbeliever (but then it’s not a romance, is it?)

I have known people who have married unbelievers.

One was married with three children by the time we met. She was a strong Christian and was raising her children in the church, but she said it was difficult … especially when it came to tithing. She wanted to be able to contribute financially to the church, but her unbelieving husband (the family breadwinner) had a different view.

Another was a strong Christian who started dating an unbeliever who became a Christian while they were dating and before they married (or so they told us). We lost touch (due to living in different countries), but recently met up with them again. They are no longer Christians and aren’t raising their children in church.

So while I expect the hero and heroine to both be Christians by the end of the book, I actually prefer it if they are both Christians at the beginning. I’m always a little sceptical about the longevity of a relationship where one person is a new believer, as I can see it causing problems later in the relationship after the last page … and while some romance readers don’t mind the “happy for now” ending, I want to read “happily ever after”.

What about you? Do you think the hero and heroine in a Christian romance both have to be Christians?

Book Review | Written on the Wind (Blackstone Legacy #2) by Elizabeth Camden

Twenty-eight-year-old Natalia Blackstone is an unusual woman for her time.

She is a banker in her father’s bank, responsible for financing the building of the Trans-Siberian Railway in Russia. Her main contact is Count Dimitri Sokolov, but he hasn’t responded to her last telegram.

When Dimitri reports witnessing an illegal massacre, he is stripped of his title and estates and sentenced to seven years in a Siberian prison. He realises he has to escape and find his way to the USA, where Natalia can help him make the truth about the massacre known. That’s obviously a tragedy, but I didn’t understand enough of the politics to see why this was so important to the Americans.

As a result, I didn’t find Written on the Wind as compelling as some of Elizabeth Camden’s other novels, despite the backdrop of the Trans-Siberians Railroad and the Russian setting. That’s a shame, because I’d been looking forward to Natalia’s story and to meeting Count Dimitri.

I think part of the problem was the friends-to-more plot.

Natalia and Dimitri had been corresponding for three years before they met, and their relationship had progressed from business to personal. It therefore seemed natural that they’d like each other when they finally met in person, but the whole thing seemed too easy.

That’s not typical for novels by Elizabeth Camden, who usually manages to write stories with unique with original settings and issues. That uniqueness is one of the strengths of her stories. The building of the railroad and the Boxer Rebellion was unique, but that was the backdrop, the device to get Dimitri to the USA, not the central story.

However, I did enjoy the banter between Natalia and Dimitri, especially their different views on matters of culture and literature. The dialogue between them was a definite strength.

The other strength was one common to all Elizabeth Camden novels: the nuggets of truth hidden in the narrative and dialogue, particularly regarding the differences between Russia and the USA. These differences were often amusingly shown through Natalia and Dimitri’s views on literature:

Novels should be written on an epic scale to explore and celebrate the depth of human suffering.

(I think this basically explains why I didn’t enjoy Tolstoy.)

Written on the Wind is the second book in The Blackstone Legacy series but can easily be read as a standalone novel.

Thanks to Baker Publishing and NetGalley for providing a free ebook review.

About Elizabeth Camden

Elizabeth Camden is a research librarian at a small college in central Florida. Her novels have won the coveted RITA and Christy Awards. She has published several articles for academic publications and is the author of four nonfiction history books. Her ongoing fascination with history and love of literature have led her to write inspirational fiction. Elizabeth lives with her husband near Orlando, Florida.

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About Written on the Wind

He carries a dangerous secret, but can he survive long enough to expose it?

Count Dimitri Sokolov has been charged with overseeing construction of the legendary Trans-Siberian Railway, but during this work, he witnesses an appalling crime, the truth of which threatens the Russian monarchy. In an effort to silence him, the czar has stripped Dimitri of his title, his lands, and his freedom . . . but Dimitri has one asset the czar knows nothing about: his deep and abiding friendship with Natalia Blackstone.

Natalia is the lead analyst for her father’s New York banking empire and manages their investment in the Trans-Siberian Railway. Her bond with Dimitri has flourished despite the miles between them, but when Dimitri goes unexpectedly missing, she sets the wheels in motion to find him. Once they join forces, they embark on a dangerous quest in which one wrong move could destroy them both.

From the steppes of Russia to the corridors of power in Washington, Dimitri and Natalia will fight against all odds to save the railroad while exposing the truth. Can their newfound love survive the ordeal?

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First Line Friday

First Line Friday | Week #236 | Under the Magnolias by T I Lowe

It’s First Line Friday! That means it’s time to pick up the nearest book and quote the first line. Today I’m sharing from Under the Magnolias by T I Lowe, a new-to-me author.

Here’s the first line from the Chapter One:

At eighty feet tall with a spread of forty feet, the southern magnolia was known to get out of hand in our part of South Carolina.

What’s the book nearest you, and what’s the first line?

About Under the Magnolias

Austin Foster is barely a teenager when her mama dies giving birth to twins, leaving her to pick up the pieces while holding her six siblings together and doing her best to stop her daddy from retreating into his personal darkness.

Scratching out a living on the family’s tobacco farm is as tough as it gets. When a few random acts of kindness help to ease the Fosters’ hardships, Austin finds herself relying upon some of Magnolia’s most colorful citizens for friendship and more. But it’s next to impossible to hide the truth about the goings-on at Nolia Farms, and Austin’s desperate attempts to save face all but break her.

Just when it seems she might have something more waiting for her—with the son of a wealthy local family who she’s crushed on for years—her father makes a choice that will crack wide-open the family’s secrets and lead to a public reckoning. There are consequences for loving a boy like Vance Cumberland, but there is also freedom in the truth.

T. I. Lowe’s gritty yet tender and uplifting tale reminds us that a great story can break your heart . . . then heal it in the best possible way.

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If you DNF a book, will you give the book (or author) a second chance?

Bookish Question #228 | If you DNF a book, will you give the book a second chance?

If you DNF a book, will you give the book (or author) a second chance?

DNF. Did not finish.

Yes, I do DNF books. Sometimes I’ll give the book a second chance, although that depends on why I DNF’d it in the first place.

If I abandon a book for a personal reason (e.g. I thought it was romance but it was actually women’s fiction), then I’ll give it another chance … on one of those days where I want to read women’s fiction.

But if I abandon the book because I have an issue with the book, then I’m unlikely to pick it up again.

What kind of issues make me DNF?

If I don’t like one of the main characters or find too many plot issues (or plot holes), then I’m unlikely to finish that book, but I will try another book by that same author.

If I abandon the book because of quality issues e.g. poor spelling, poor writing, or a badly formatted ebook (like the one that had spaces everywhere there should have been a letter F), then I will try another book by that author … but I will make sure I read the sample first. If the sample shows the same issues, I won’t give the author a third chance. There are too many other authors out there!

If I try two or three books by the same author and don’t finish any of them (or don’t enjoy any of them), then I’m unlikely to give that author a fourth chance. There are a couple of popular authors I don’t read simply because I’ve never latched on to their writing style. That’s on me, not them, but I’m not going to spend my time or money buying books I’m unlikely to enjoy.

What about you? If you DNF a book, will you give the book (or author) another chance?

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Book Review | When the Day Comes by Gabrielle Meyer

Several years ago, I read Dreamlander by KM Weiland, a novel about a man who went to sleep in our world and woke up in another time and place. It was a fascinating concept, and I enjoyed the whole novel except for the end (which had exactly  the same problem as the end of the Divergent trilogy).

So when I read that When The Day Comes had a similar premise, I had to read it.

The book description gave me the impression Meyer had thought through the concept better than Weiland had, and gave me hope of a more satisfying ending:

Libby comes from a long line of time-crossers, identified by a sunburst birthmark over their heart. They live in two times at once, crossing between times when they fall asleep at night (with the added bonus of never being tired). Time-crossers live in two times until they turn twenty-one, when they have to choose one time to live in for the rest of their lives.

This means that at the age of almost twenty, Libby (aka Anne Elizabeth) has lived for almost forty years: nineteen in Colonial Williamsburg, shortly before the War of Independence, and nineteen years in the Gilded Age. As such, she’s more mature than most teenagers, because she has literally lived longer.

I found the whole idea fascinating, especially as it was clear from the beginning that Libby intended to stay in Colonial times, because her 1774 mother is also a time-crosser. This is the mother Libby loves, and the mother with whom she shares all the trials of her privileged life in  Gilded Age New York and London. My first thought would be that she’d stay in 1914 because her family is financially stable, and because she’d want to miss the war she knows is coming in America (and because I figured she wouldn’t know about the war due to start in Europe).

But I was wrong.

She actually had a lot more freedom in 1774, as well as not having a manipulative mother determined to marry her off to the most titled gentleman she can find. Of course, it helps that 1774 Libby is in love, even though she knows the difference in their stations means she’ll never be allowed to marry him.

As modern readers who know history (or who have access to the internet), there is always a sense of knowing where the story might be going in historical fiction. As such, it was fascinating to read a historical novel where the characters also knew some of what was coming—Libby and her mother both knew which side to choose in America’s upcoming War of Independence, and Libby’s time-crosser mother was from 1994, so also knew some twentieth century history.

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The whole story is told in first person, from Libby’s point of view. But it flips between the two times and two families and two sets of supporting characters. As such, it reads a lot like a split time novel, but with the main character being the connecting factor between the two times.

A novel that’s effectively told from one point of view needs a strong and compelling narrator.

When the Day Comes definitely has that. There are a few times when Libby’s beliefs and attitudes seem very modern, perhaps too modern for 1774. But that’s explained by the fact  she also lives in 1914 and was raised by a woman who was born in 1973. As such, it’s not surprising that Libby and her mother have modern ideas about women’s rights and equal rights.

I thought When the Day Comes was excellent, particularly the ending. It definitely didn’t suffer from a weak or unbelievable ending. Even better, the ending hints at the possibility of a sequel. I suspect so, because the cover says “Timeless Book 1” which surely indicates there will be a Book 2.

Recommended for fans of historical fiction and especially split time.

Thanks to Bethany House and NetGalley for providing a  free ebook for review.

About Gabrielle Meyer

Gabrielle Meyer

Gabrielle lives on the banks of the Upper Mississippi River with her husband and four children. As an employee of the Minnesota Historical Society, she fell in love with the rich history of her state and enjoys writing historical and contemporary novels inspired by real people, places, and events. The river is a constant source of inspiration for Gabrielle, and if you look closely, you will find a river in each of her stories.

When Gabrielle is not writing, you might find her homeschooling her children, cheering them on at sporting and theatrical events, or hosting a gathering at her home with family and friends.

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About When the Day Comes

How will she choose, knowing all she must sacrifice?

Libby has been given a powerful gift: to live one life in 1774 Colonial Williamsburg and the other in 1914 Gilded Age New York City. When she falls asleep in one life, she wakes up in the other. While she’s the same person at her core in both times, she’s leading two vastly different lives.

In Colonial Williamsburg, Libby is a public printer for the House of Burgesses and the Royal Governor, trying to provide for her family and support the Patriot cause. The man she loves, Henry Montgomery, has his own secrets. As the revolution draws near, both their lives–and any hope of love–are put in jeopardy.

Libby’s life in 1914 New York is filled with wealth, drawing room conversations, and bachelors. But the only work she cares about–women’s suffrage–is discouraged, and her mother is intent on marrying her off to an English marquess. The growing talk of war in Europe only complicates matters.

But Libby knows she’s not destined to live two lives forever. On her twenty-first birthday, she must choose one path and forfeit the other–but how can she choose when she has so much to lose in each life?

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First Line Friday

First Line Friday | Week #235 | When the Day Comes by Gabrielle Meyer

It’s First Line Friday! That means it’s time to pick up the nearest book and quote the first line. Today I’m sharing from When the Day Comes by Gabrielle Meyer, a new split time novel with a unique quirk. Here’s the first line from the Chapter One:

For as long as I could remember, my mama had told me that my life was a gift.

What’s the book nearest you, and what’s the first line?

About When the Day Comes

How will she choose, knowing all she must sacrifice?

Libby has been given a powerful gift: to live one life in 1774 Colonial Williamsburg and the other in 1914 Gilded Age New York City. When she falls asleep in one life, she wakes up in the other. While she’s the same person at her core in both times, she’s leading two vastly different lives.

In Colonial Williamsburg, Libby is a public printer for the House of Burgesses and the Royal Governor, trying to provide for her family and support the Patriot cause. The man she loves, Henry Montgomery, has his own secrets. As the revolution draws near, both their lives–and any hope of love–are put in jeopardy.

Libby’s life in 1914 New York is filled with wealth, drawing room conversations, and bachelors. But the only work she cares about–women’s suffrage–is discouraged, and her mother is intent on marrying her off to an English marquess. The growing talk of war in Europe only complicates matters.

But Libby knows she’s not destined to live two lives forever. On her twenty-first birthday, she must choose one path and forfeit the other–but how can she choose when she has so much to lose in each life?

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At what point do you give up on reading a book you’re not enjoying?

Bookish Question #227 | At what point do you give up on reading a book you’re not enjoying?

At what point do you give up on reading a book you’re not enjoying?

As with so many bookish questions, it depends 🙂

If I’m checking out the book before buying, then I’ll only read enough to decide whether I want to buy or not—which could be as little as the first couple of pages. If it doesn’t grab me, it goes back on the shelf (real or virtual).

If it’s a book I’ve downloaded for free on Kindle, then it gets much the same treatment. I’ll start reading, but stop if it doesn’t interest me. Then I’ll put it back on the virtual bookshelf for another time … unless the book has multiple typos and errors in those first few pages, enough to tell me I’ll never want to read the full book.

If it’s a book I paid money for, then I’m more likely to persevere.

My perseverance is generally in line with how much I paid. If I bought a 99 cent ebook to support the author, then I don’t feel obliged to read the book if I’m not enjoying it. If I bought a 99 cent anthology, then I’ll happily abandon any story I’m not enjoying and move on.

I try not to buy more expensive ebooks unless I have read and enjoyed the sample. Recently, I’ve started buying ebooks only if I’m going to read them right away, so they don’t end up cluttering my Kindle’s to-read pile. It also means I’m less likely to give up on them, because I’m in the right mood for reading (otherwise I wouldn’t have bought it).

I find it harder to give up on paperbacks, because they’re so much more expensive than ebooks.

But if I try the book two or three times and still can’t get into it, I’ll add it to my donation pile. At least then I’m giving someone the opportunity to read the book.

The hardest books for me to give up are the free ebooks I’ve downloaded to review. I’ve been provided with the ebook on the understanding I will write a review, so I find it difficult to give up, even if I’m not enjoying the book.

I have found I’ve become a lot more prepared to give up on a book since I got an ereader.

Back when I exclusively bought paperbacks from the local Christian bookstore, I’d persevere with a title even if I wasn’t especially enjoying because that book was the only book I had to read. Now I have an ereader, there is always a better book available in a few clicks, so I’m much more likely to move on.

However, I will retry books that didn’t appeal the first time if I think the reason the title didn’t appeal was about me and my mood e.g. I thought it was a romance but it turned out to be a mystery, or I wanted to read a rom-com and the title is women’s fiction.

But if I gave up because of bad writing or because I don’t like a main character or central plot point? I delete it (or give the paper book away) and don’t look back.

What about you? At what point do you give up on a book you’re not enjoying?