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First Line Friday

First Line Friday | Week 191 | Polarized Love by Lisa Renee

It’s First Line Friday! That means it’s time to pick up the nearest book and quote the first line. Today I’m sharing from Polarized Love, the third book in the Single Again series from Australian author Lisa Renee.

Here’s the first line from the Chapter One:

Bethany Michaels stared at chunks of beige vomit splatterd across the Navy officer's polished shoes--her vomit.

I have visited Rottnest Island, and it was great fun (although our crossing was a little calmer than this one). I’m looking forward to “visiting” again in the pages of this book, and meeting more quokkas.

What’s the book nearest you, and what’s the first line?

About Polarized Love

Polarized Love begins with a fun, romantic encounter on the shores of Rottnest Island. An American Navy chaplain meets a feisty Australian journalist investigating the Quokka mystery.

Why are the rare marsupials dying on the Island? Will the handsome American, Lachlan Peters, help Bethany Michaels with her cause or distract her from her mission?

Beth has served her family and father’s church faithfully, and now it’s her turn to leave the nest and spread her wings. But does her dad push her into the arms of the right man to launch his daughter into her God-given destiny?

When an American sailor, Nick DeHann, arrives on the shores of the West Coast of Australia, Beth is swept away with the promise of high aspirations. As the rushed relationship unfolds, Beth finds herself torn between following someone else’s dream or settling for the comfort of home and all she’s ever known.

Lachlan Peters returns to San Diego from his time in the Navy and tries to gain his footing in a life that has passed him by. Will Lachlan realize what he’s missing out on before Beth commits to another man?

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What's your view on chapter titles in fiction?

Bookish Question #182 | What’s Your View on Chapter Titles in Fiction?

Chapter Titles in Fiction—Love, Loathe, or Ignore?

Most of the books I read are on Kindle, and the Kindle book often defaults to opening at Chapter One. As such, I don’t see the Table of Contents to know whether there are chapter titles or not (although I suspect not).

It’s therefore a surprise when I do see chapter titles.

As it happens, I saw this question on Twitter this week. Most of the respondents seemed to like chapter titles … but they were also authors who used chapter titles. I’m not convinced that was an unbiased sample.

Personally, I’m not a fan.

Why not? Because too often, the chapter titles feel like they are telling me what’s going to be in the next chapter.

Here’s an example (from the Twitter thread I read):

Table of Contents with Chapter Titles that tell the whole story

While there are a couple of clever chapter titles, some are too obvious and “telling” what’s going to happen. It almost looks like a copy of their beat sheet (a tool some writers use in planning their novel). I can see that being useful for authors.

I’m not so sure it’s great for readers.

I can see this being useful in children’s fiction, especially for parents or teachers who are reading aloud to children. Having a “spoiler” chapter title give the reader an idea of what is coming so they can choose to stop reading at an appropriate time.

As an adult, it feels childish. After all, why read the book if I can get the essence of the story by reading the Table of Contents?

I know some authors use chapter titles when writing, both to remind them what they’ve already written and to act as a prompt for what should happen in the next scene or chapter. But they typically get deleted during editing.

It’s hard to come up with good chapter titles. If they’re not needed, why bother? Why not spend that time and creative effort on polishing the writing instead?

Overall, I either ignore chapter titles, or loathe them.

What about you? Are you a fan of chapter titles in fiction?

If so, can you suggest a novel where the chapter titles enhance the story?
Pictures were deceptive. They never told the true story.

Book Review | Come Back to Me (Waters of Time #1) by Jody Hedlund

Scientist Marion Creighton is urgently called from her home in the USA to Canterbury, England, with the news that her father has fallen into a coma.

When she arrives, she finds he has been researching the Tree of Life from the Garden of Eden. Apparently, he believes seeds from the original tree made it to England, where they were planted and grew and “tainted” a long-forgotten well which provides water with miraculous healing powers.

Clues suggest her father has somehow travelled back in time to find the source of this healing water, in order to heal Marian’s sister from the genetic disease which killed her father. Marian has a couple of strange experiences which leave her wondering if her father was right …

She finds and drinks some of the healing water, and finds herself in 1381, with one week to locate the source of the water so her father’s friend, Harrison Dunham, can give future-Marian the life-giving water and bring her back to the present.

Yes, that’s getting a little convoluted.

While I was fascinated by the concept of time travel in the novel, I wasn’t entirely convinced by the practicalities. Specifically, that Marian is physically alive in both timelines, and time moving forward at the same pace. This could be because I see time as linear something physicists are apparently debating). Also, she believed her father was missing in time and that she could “wish” herself to a specific point in time. Why didn’t she try and find her missing father?

Anyway, if you’re prepared to accept the premise, then the practicalities might not matter.

But this was a sticking point for me. Another sticking point was that Marian travelled back to 1381, yet had no communication problems with the locals. Considering the differences between modern British and American English (or even modern London and modern Yorkshire English), I found this a little hard to believe. Finally, I wasn’t impressed by the instalust. Yes, I like the hero and heroine in a romance to be attracted to each other, but that attraction has to be based on something.

However, I was impressed by the underlying research and the way the author seamlessly included real-life events like the 1381 Peasant’s Revolt and even an earthquake into the plot. And while I don’t believe the claims about the Tree of Life, I do believe the accounts of miraculous healings.

Overall, Come Back to Me was an intriguing story, and one that promises to be continued in a sequel. Recommended for fans of time travel fiction.

Thanks to Revell and NetGalley for providing a free ebook for review.

About Jody Hedlund

Jody Hedlund

Jody Hedlund is the bestselling author of more than thirty historical novels for both adults and teens, including Come Back to Me, and is the winner of numerous awards, including the Christy, Carol, and Christian Book Awards. Jody lives in Michigan with her husband, busy family, and five spoiled cats. She loves to imagine that she really can visit the past, although she’s yet to accomplish the feat, except via the many books she reads.

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About Come Back to Me

The ultimate cure that could heal any disease? Crazy.

That’s exactly what research scientist Marian Creighton has always believed about her father’s quest, even if it does stem from a desire to save her sister Ellen from the genetic disease that stole their mother from them. But when her father falls into a coma after drinking a vial of holy water believed to contain traces of residue from the Tree of Life, Marian must question all of her assumptions. He’s left behind tantalizing clues that suggest he’s crossed back in time. Insane. Until Marian tests his theories and finds herself in the Middle Ages during a dangerous peasant uprising.

William Durham, a valiant knight comes to Marian’s rescue and offers her protection . . . as his wife. The longer Marian stays in the past, the more she cares about William. Can she ever find her father and make it back to the present to heal her sister? And when the time comes to leave, will she want to?

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First Line Friday

First Line Friday | Week 190 | All Arranged by Meredith Resce

It’s First Line Friday! That means it’s time to pick up the nearest book and quote the first line. I’m sharing a new release from Australian author Meredith Resce: All Arranged, the third book in her Luella Linley romance series.

Here’s the first line from the Chapter One:

Louise Brooker saved the document and shut her laptop. Her latest Luella Linley novel was sounding depressingly like real life.

What’s the book nearest you, and what’s the first line?

About All Arranged

Regency romance author, Luella Linley (AKA Louise Brooker), should feel satisfied she has helped her two daughters marry happily. However, her successful meddling came at a price and her husband has advised she leave the children to their own devices.

But her eldest, Pete, is thirty-five, living back at home and dejected after having been jilted days before his wedding. Her responsible, hard-working and handsome son would make a good husband and father—but he’s given up after three failed relationships. He’s a good catch, but unlikely to be fooled by his mother’s scheming and meddling.

This situation calls for a direct approach. Just like in her novels, Louise decides the parents should do the arranging and sort out the wheat from the chaff.

Carrie Davis is a dedicated career woman and hasn’t had time for relationships. However, her sister, Ellen, is now happily married with a delightful little girl and for the first time, Carrie finds loneliness stalking her. Ellen want’s the best for Carrie, so when she comes across an odd advert in the classifieds, she wonders if it is a prank or an opportunity sent from heaven.

“Wanted. For a social experiment. A family arranged marriage.”

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Can you be enticed to impulsively buy books?

Bookish Question #181 | Can you be enticed to impulsively buy books?

Can I be enticed to impulsively buy books?

Is this a trick question?

Of course.

Why? Because I’m a reader.

I love reading. I love escaping to a world inside my head, aided and guided by the imagination of a skilled author. I love learning about people and places, and reading fiction is an easy way to learn (which is one of the reasons I dislike fiction that isn’t factually accurate).

The best way to entice me to impulse buy a book or books is to have a sales. Authors rave about those BookBub ads for a reason: because people like me buy the books. It’s hard to pass up a 99 cent book that’s on my wish list!

Another way to get me to buy a book is for the author to write a great book, and for a trusted friend to recommend that book to me. This could be in person, or through a book review.

The final great way to entice me to impulse buy a book is to have a paper copy on sale at a writing conference. I especially like the Omega Writer’s Conference in Australia, where the bookstall has been known to offer to post our purchases for us, so we don’t have to worry about annoying details like weight limits on flights.

But all these enticements only work if I like the look and sound of the book.

This means having an eye-catching cover, an intriguing title, and compelling back cover copy. A killer first line is also a help, especially if I’m flicking through a paper copy. And, of course, the price has to be right. I’m not prepared to pay more than about USD 5.99 for an ebook (and I’m a sucker for 99 cent ebooks), but I will pay NZD 25 to NZD 30 for a paperback … especially if it’s a book I’ve worked on.

What about you? Can you be enticed to impulsively buy books?

Freedom without order, without justice—it leads to chaos and violence. But order without freedom, without kindness—it makes you hard. Cruel.

Book Review | When Twilight Breaks by Sarah Sundin

When Twilight Breaks is set in 1938 Munich, Germany. Each chapter starts with the day and date, which gave the novel a sense of urgency, as though it was all leading up to some fateful day in history (but which day? I couldn’t remember, and that helped with the suspense).

Evelyn Brand is an American journalist working in Germany as a foreign correspondent.

That was two pluses in her favour: she was a professional woman, and her profession was why she was in Hitler’s Germany.

(This is important, as many years ago I read another novel about an American novel in Hitler’s Germany which made no sense, because the character had no compelling reason to be there. The result was I didn’t much care whether she succeeded in escaping or not).

Evelyn sees the dark underbelly of fascism and wants to report that to her American readers. However, that leaves her having to find the narrow line between telling the truth and not telling so much of the truth that the Germans will find out and expel her from the country … or worse.

Unfortunately, as the sole female in her news office, she’s often given the ‘softball’ assignments. One of these introduces her to Peter Lang, an American professor at the nearby university who is pursuing his PhD.

Peter admires what Hitler has done for the German people. He reduced unemployment and brought prosperity back to a country suffering from the losses of World War I and the subsequent global depression. He wishes America were the same.

In hindsight, we all know Hitler’s Germany was evil.

The Nazi regime killed undesirables—the ‘work shy’, the disabled, the Jews, anyone who spoke out against the government. So it’s interesting to see Peter’s early perspective, and see how he has been deceived by outward appearance. At the same time, he’s obviously the hero, which means he has to change his mind …

Peter was not alone in his views. I heard a podcast interview with Sarah Sundin where she commented that those Americans who travelled to Germany in the 1930s expecting to find a successful society found one, and those who expected to find a facade with a sordid underbelly found that. It shows the importance of looking at both sides of an issue, and how politics is often more grey than black and white.

Free speech is an issue Evelyn and Peter debate:

“Free speech had its problems. Free speech could work people into a frenzy, leading to violence. But where did you draw the line? All he knew was that the Germany government had drawn the line in the wrong place.”

This highlights a current issue: where do we draw the line? What is the difference between free speech and hate speech? Do we allow hate speech as part of our effort to protect free speech? And what happens when hateful speech leads to hateful action and people die?

Yes, When Twilight Breaks asks big questions, questions that don’t have easy answers. That made for a fascinating read.

However, I did find he last quarter slow going. I don’t want to give spoilers, but it felt like the story petered (sorry!) out at around the 75% mark. An earlier minor conflict was reintroduced, and it felt like it was added and magnified in an attempt to drag the story out. The last quarter wasn’t bad. It just didn’t match the strength and pace of the first three-quarters of the novel.

When Twilight Breaks by @SarahSundin is both an excellent Christian historical romance, and a thought-provoking metaphor for our modern world. #ChristianFiction Share on X

But I still recommend When Twilight Breaks, both as an excellent Christian historical romance, and as a thought-provoking metaphor for our modern world. May we learn from the lessons of the past and not repeat them.

Thanks to Revell and NetGalley for providing a free ebook for review.

About Sarah Sundin

Sarah SundinSarah Sundin is the author of The Sea Before Us and The Sky Above Us, as well as the Waves of Freedom, Wings of the Nightingale, and Wings of Glory series. Her novels have received starred reviews from BooklistLibrary Journal, and Publishers Weekly. Her popular Through Waters Deep was a Carol Award finalist, and both Through Waters Deep and When Tides Turn were named on Booklist‘s “101 Best Romance Novels of the Last 10 Years.” Sarah lives in Northern California.

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About When Twilight Breaks

Munich, 1938. Evelyn Brand is an American foreign correspondent as determined to prove her worth in a male-dominated profession as she is to expose the growing tyranny in Nazi Germany. To do so, she must walk a thin line. If she offends the government, she could be expelled from the country–or worse. If she fails to truthfully report on major stories, she’ll never be able to give a voice to the oppressed–and wake up the folks back home.

In another part of the city, American graduate student Peter Lang is working on his PhD in German. Disillusioned with the chaos in the world due to the Great Depression, he is impressed with the prosperity and order of German society. But when the brutality of the regime hits close, he discovers a far better way to use his contacts within the Nazi party–to feed information to the shrewd reporter he can’t get off his mind.

This electric standalone novel from fan-favorite Sarah Sundin puts you right at the intersection of pulse-pounding suspense and heart-stopping romance.

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First Line Friday

First Line Friday | Week 189 | Lethal Cover-Up by Darlene L Turner

It’s First Line Friday … time to pick up the nearest book and quote the first line! I’ve just received a review copy of Lethal Cover-Up by Darlene L Turner, her latest release from Love Inspired Suspense, so that’s my pick. I’m a definite romantic suspense fan, so the chances of me not reading this right away are low.

Here’s the first line from the Chapter One:

"They're after me!" Border patrol officer Madison Steele stiffened at the sound of her sister's frantic voice.

Between the action-packed cover and that first line, how can I resist?

What’s the book nearest you, and what’s the first line?

 

About Lethal Cover-Up

Some secrets are dangerous…

But uncovering the truth could be deadly.

Border patrol officer Madison Steele knows her sister Leah’s fatal car crash was no accident. Someone’s willing to kill to cover up a pharmaceutical company’s deadly crime of distributing tainted drugs. Now they are after Madison to tie off loose ends. But with her high school sweetheart, Canadian police constable Tucker Reed, at her side, can Madison expose the company’s deadly plan before she becomes the next victim?

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Do you like reading novels with royalty themes?

Bookish Question #180 | Do you like reading novels with royalty themes?

Yesterday was the annual Queen’s Birthday holiday in New Zealand and parts of Australia, a day off work to observe the official birthday of HM Queen Elizabeth II. Her actual birthday is in April, so I don’t know why we celebrate it in June. As a child, I was told it was because June was summer in England. That’s true, but the English don’t have a holiday in June, so why do we?

Anyway, that raises this week’s question: do you like reading novels with royalty themes?

I have to say yes and no.

I don’t mind reading speculative fiction with made-up royal characters.

After all, made-up royal characters fit with a made-up world and made-up religion. It’s always interesting to see how authors create their worlds, cultures, and religions. Royalty is often a part of that. And it’s almost to be expected in Christian speculative fiction, with themes of God as King of Kings and Lord of Lords, and us as His adoptive children–which makes us all princes and princesses.

I also don’t mind reading fictionalised versions of real, historical events involving royalty.

Having said that, I have read rather too many novels about the Tudors in particular and English royalty in general, and I’d welcome good fiction—especially Christian fiction—that showed royalty from other countries.

However, I’m not a big fan of contemporary fiction (especially romance) featuring royal families.

I’m not interested in fictionalised versions of the lives of still-living people—I haven’t even watched The Crown. I’m also not interested in made-up contemporary royal families, perhaps because the lives of our real royal family have more than enough drama.

What about you? Do like reading novels with royalty themes?

The power of words does not lie in the stories we tell but in our ability to connect with the hearts of those who read them.

Book Review | The Librarian of Saint-Malo by Mario Escabar

The Librarian of Saint-Malo features, unsurprisingly, the town librarian from the small French town of Saint-Malo as a main character. Jocelyn and Antoine Ferrec marry on 1 September 1939, the day Germany illegally invades Poland, the event which creates World War II.

History tells us the city and the country did not fare well in the war.

This novel shows us some of what happened from a French point of view. That was a new perspective for me. While I’ve read a lot of novels set in and around World War II, almost all of them have been set in the USA or England, and told from the American or English point of view–American or English authors, and American or English characters.

A smaller number have shown the war in Germany, but still from the American or English viewpoint. Where there have been German characters, they’ve either been “good” Nazis (which are about as believable as “good” slaveowners in American Civil War fiction) or the Nazis have been the evildoers (well, history).

It was refreshing to read a story showing the war from the point of view of the occupied French.

(The book is written by a Spaniard, who were neutral in World War II). It provided new insights into the occupation, and didn’t have the American need for a stereotypical heroic main character. It’s a welcome difference.

I’ve seen a couple of reviews moaning about this book as being yet another Nazi romance, with the subtext being that the Nazis were monsters and we shouldn’t be trying to romanticise them. While I agree we shouldn’t romanticise evil, I don’t think this book can truthfully be classed with other Nazi romances.

First, The Librarian of Saint-Malo is not a romance (it’s historical fiction).

Second, while one of the German soldiers clearly has feelings for Jocelyn, I didn’t think she was anywhere close to being in love with him. And finally, the story wasn’t written by a white American woman trying to show a redemption story. It was more a gritty war story written by a Spanish man. As such, the ending is more inevitable than the happy-ever-after of a romance novel.

The novel is introduced as a series of letters from Jocelyn, the Saint-Malo librarian, to her literary hero, the fictional Marcel Zola. She explains in the Prologue why she has chosen to write to him, and there is the occasional mention of the letters or reminder in the body of the novel that these are meant to be letters. But they’re not—not like in other epistolary novels, like Daddy Long Legs by Jean Webster, Dear Mr. Knightley by Katherine Reay, Things We Didn’t Say by Amy Lynn Green, or The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel By Society by Mary Ann Safer and Annie Barrows.

The Librarian of Saint-Malo by Mario Escabar is a unique epistolary novel about World War II, set in France and written by a Spaniard. #HistoricalFiction #BookReview Share on X

Instead, the story read much like any other historical novel, albeit one written in first person point of view, as a letter would be. The story was exceptionally well researched (well, except for the line about “God Save the Queen”. The song changes names depending on who is on the throne, and the monarch during World War II was King George). I especially liked the fact the novel was written by a Spaniard—we need more historical fiction written from non-American perspectives.

We see the war progress through Jocelyn’s eyes.

We see the fall of France, the refugees (that was new to me), the arrival of the Germans, billetting, and the SS. The story takes us through the emotion of a lot of these events in a way a history book can’t, but the overall voice is still one of a person telling her story and trying to keep the emotion out of it. The French might mock the British for their stiff upper lips, but Jocelyn does a good impression. But the understated emotion makes it all the more powerful.

This is the first translated Mario Escabar novel I’ve read. I was impressed, and I will certainly watch out for future novels from him. Recommended for historical fiction fans.

Thanks to Thomas Nelson and NetGalley for providing a free ebook for review.

About The Librarian of Saint-Malo

Through letters with a famous author, one French librarian tells her love story and describes the brutal Nazi occupation of her small coastal village.

Saint-Malo, France: August 1939. Jocelyn and Antoine are childhood sweethearts, but just after they marry, Antoine is called up to fight against Germany. As the war rages, Jocelyn focuses on comforting and encouraging the local population by recommending books from her beloved library in Saint-Malo. She herself finds hope in her letters to a famous author.

After the French capitulation, the Nazis occupy the town and turn it into a fortress to control the north of French Brittany. Residents try passive resistance, but the German commander ruthlessly purges part of the city’s libraries to destroy any potentially subversive writings. At great risk to herself, Jocelyn manages to hide some of the books while waiting to receive news from Antoine, who has been taken to a German prison camp.

What unfolds in her letters is Jocelyn’s description of her mission: to protect the people of Saint-Malo and the books they hold so dear. With prose both sweeping and romantic, Mario Escobar brings to life the occupied city and re-creates the history of those who sacrificed all to care for the people they loved.

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If you really love your country there's no need to surround yourself with its symbols or brag about your origins.

First Line Friday

First Line Friday | Week 188 | Love and the Silver Lining by Tammy L Gray

It’s First Line Friday! That means it’s time to pick up the nearest book and quote the first line. Today I’m sharing from Love and the Silver Lining by Tammy L Gray, the second book in her State of Grace series. She is one of my favourite Christian romance authors, so I’m looking forward to reading this!

Here’s the first line from the Chapter One:

I'm supposed to be on an airplane, flying to Central America to teach children to speak English.

What’s the book nearest you, and what’s the first line?

About Love and the Silver Lining

This disaster may be just what she needed.

Darcy Malone’s dreams of mission work are dashed on the eve of fulfilling them: The Guatemalan school she was going to teach at has closed, and she’s already quit her job and given up her apartment. Stuck in her worst-case scenario, Darcy accepts an unexpected offer to move in with Bryson Katsaros’s little sister, despite the years of distrust between her and Bryson, the lead singer in her best friend Cameron’s band. But as she meets those close to Bryson, Darcy quickly discovers there is more to him than just his bad-boy persona.

Needing to find a purpose for all her sudden free time, Darcy jumps at the chance to care for and train a group of unruly dogs, with the aim of finding each a home before their bereaved owner returns them to animal control. But it’s Darcy herself who will encounter a surprising rescue in the form of love, forgiveness, and learning to let go.

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